Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Chapter 3 (fragment, run on, or comma splice?)

16. Fragment
Although they began as a side business for Disney, destination weddings now represent a major income source.

17. Fragment:
About 2,000 weddings are held yearly; which is twice the number just ten years ago.

18. Comma splice
Weddings may take place in less than one hour; however, the cost may be as much as 5,000.

19. Run-on
Limousines line up outside Disney's wedding pavillion; ceremonies are scheduled in two hour intervals.

20. Run-on
Many couples prefer a traditional wedding, others request a fantasy experience.

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